https://youtu.be/VFHxbSxY1sI
Feedback: The biggest feedback I got from the last pitch was the buff that I was wearing over my face. A buff is a common item that many fisherman wear and it take the place of putting greasy sunscreen on your face. I wore it to make the video more interesting and play they part. None of the feedback was silly or unnecessary.
Reflection: I have definitely come a long way since the first pitch as far as what details to add to make it more clear and still be concise. The feedback has definitely been really important in helping point out what needs to be said because in a small sense they are the general public. The comments really helped me fine tune my pitches.
Isaac - Congratulations, as you have said, your speech has improved a lot since the first one. Now it's a clear speech, and very concise. Through improvement your idea has adopted a nice shape. Good job!!
ReplyDeleteWhere do I get one?! Great pitch Isaac. You clearly understand your product and your pitch represents your knowledge. I agree that not covering your face come across better in the pitch. I though it to perhaps start the pitch with the buff and take it off the moment you start speaking. Good stuff though. I will look for your product in my local tackle store. Don't forget to include the mahi offshore version in the SKUs of products. Good luck!
ReplyDeleteAnother great pitch Isaac. You have great understanding of your product. Although I don't feel that a minute is enough time I would just say to shorten up the video for the assignment requirements. Especially with your product a good quick explanation and the product will sell itself. Good work again.
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch and a noticeable improvement from the last one. The buff was a good idea on paper but the video felt better without it. With that being said, if there are other things that you can use as props that don't cover your face, you could use them to make the video more interesting. With an idea like yours, it would be cool if you shot the elevator pitch video outdoors near a lake.
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