https://youtu.be/9XICSHFzOeU
My feedback was very, very good and gave me a lot of confidence on my idea. The two big things were volume and why wouldn't the fish just pull the bobber down. I made sure I fixed the volume issue and explained that models with longer string can be used for deeper water. Where this product will shine is in water less than 5 feet. I believe non of my feed back was "silly" it was all very useful for me.
Isaac - Your elevator spitch is pretty good if we look at the content, rythm of the speech and modulation, but I don't understand why you wear that scarf over your neck and mouth. It hides your face, and I am sure that a potential investor would like to see the face of the entrepreneur who is proposing him his idea.
ReplyDeleteLove the creativity, surprisingly you are still understandable with the face shield on. As mentioned before I love the simplicity and applicability of your product. I think the only thing that would hold your product back is if you created a business around it. Unless of course you had other great ideas. I think the most successful way of doing this is selling right to existing companies. Great work!
ReplyDeleteI agree with the comment Manuel left, it felt strange seeing most of your face covered for a speech video but it didn't sound like it hindered you so it's not that big of a deal. You did a good job with content of the speech and the camera angle. You explained your product well and allowed us to see all of the gestures you were making.
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